One of my writings advice, opinions, how could I make it longer if it needs to be?

Walking the streets of gold all alone.


Realizing that fantasies are only dreams


And wishes never come true.


Yet hope is all that is needed,


To survive this world


Only how we look at others is important


It seems and not who they are.One of my writings advice, opinions, how could I make it longer if it needs to be?
Your poem is fine. Length does not make a poem, meaning does.





Here is how I would edit this:





Walking the streets of gold alone,


Knowing that my fantasies are dreams.


Wishes that will not come true,


Yet hope is all I need.


The only way I will survive,


Is taking people at face value,


And not what they try to be.





A poems ability to inspire or ignite is based upon the contents, not the length of the poem.; I think you have a wonederful start here. My edit is just an idea, I am sure you can do much better, it is your poem.One of my writings advice, opinions, how could I make it longer if it needs to be?
I didn't like it for the most part. However,





';Only how we look at others is important


It seems and not who they are.';





is a brilliant line!!!! It really made me pause and think. I like that a lot!!!!
I read this and I get the theme of Hollywood and how image conscious and judgmental it can be. If you wish to lengthen it, be aware of theme, set a structure and then write to the structure around the theme roughly, you can then edit what you have.


Maybe go to an event or something more in detail because what you have so far creates a nice image of place, now you could add event maybe?
and ...I forgot to tell about the sky-do someone want to know what?
its pritty good by its self